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To be uploaded: Backgrounds - Critique, plz!

Tue Jun 30, 2009, 11:27 AM
I've done a series of backgrounds in 1024x768 for a visual novel I'm working on with my sis using RenPy. Backgrounds are done in Photoshop. I will downscale them to 800x600 and crop where needed, when they are all complete.

I have almost all of Chapter 1's backgrounds done (3 variations each - day, rain, and sunset), and since backgrounds are re-usable this should be some good progress toward the visual novel in general. (I'm no artist, and I wish I could draw. Gonna work on that... somehow.) DX

I was wondering, would anyone be willing to critique them?

LINKS:
- Campus Center [link]
- Classroom (Day) [link]
- Library (Sunset) [link]
- Library (Day) [link]
- Hallway (School Building) [link]

I need much criticism with these, please. But not too rough. ;P But I've already done quite a few of 'em. It's easier to do something, but I feel swamped when I see the amazing artwork here. Inspiration one second, and belittlement the next...! XD

~Night

  • Mood: Suffering
  • Listening to: 川田まみ -
  • Reading: Ayn Rand - Atlas Shrugged; Genki Japanese books
  • Watching: Trying to figure this one out
  • Playing: Melty Blood AC
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: COFFEEEEEE <333

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But mostly, thank you so much for all the feedback on my photos! It's great to hear what other people think of my photos, and I'm glad your one of the few who will share it!

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